This is the end

I think this is very dark. And it immediately got to me when I read it. I think that the flow is very good and I liked this poem immensely. Every line seems crammed with so much meaning that reading it again is a must. Well done. xx

This one's very dark, but it means a lot to anyone who can seem to understand a bit of it.

It seems as if you didn't have a problem at all with writing this poem. The flow was well done, and the rhymes didn't fee forced at all. Keepit up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

The darkest poem i ever read, this one was better then the last i read, much better so this poem is truly a masterpiece :)

5/5

~StefQ

Oh My God. I Love This.

This is absolutely amazing... So strong, so dark and sinister, such a reminder, and such a story! This is absolutely amazing. ... Just wow.

xDarkSuicidex 10.5 (If only that were possible!)

Loved this poem. Although it's short, you ended it in a perfect way. Some people attempt to make poems longer and ruin what they've already written. Really enjoyed reading this. Great choice of language.