I'm definaly sticking with wat i said last time i read this:-
"that is dead set one of the best poems i've read on this site"

It's awesome, like, practiacally every aspect of the poem is perfect, i really like this and it's worthy of only the higest praise.

Blood drinkers walk the blackened earth
we wear black bands to mourn
lords blood spills into sunset
as the Antichrist is born

I love that part the most.
Rock on suz, luv ya.

President Dead

Sad creepily sad.
'A master piece'
as they say.
Ithink they say that, then again im not inclinded to listen..
lol
may the force be with you.
~Emah

A very dark/haunting poem. With good imagry too! I liked the rhyming aswell, I didn't think they seemed forced at all. You had a good strong ending, overall a pretty good damn poem. Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow tht is really good i liked it keep on writing..

This was a pretty good poem, there was a lot of imagery. You created a perfect setting and situation in this poem. Well done.

Beautiful poem and descriptions, one thing, the last line of the first stanza doesn't seem to flow as well as the others.

Loved this poem. Although it's short, you ended it in a perfect way. Some people attempt to make poems longer and ruin what they've already written. Really enjoyed reading this. Great choice of language.

Oh My God. I Love This.

This is absolutely amazing... So strong, so dark and sinister, such a reminder, and such a story! This is absolutely amazing. ... Just wow.

xDarkSuicidex 10.5 (If only that were possible!)

The darkest poem i ever read, this one was better then the last i read, much better so this poem is truly a masterpiece :)

5/5

~StefQ

This one's very dark, but it means a lot to anyone who can seem to understand a bit of it.

It seems as if you didn't have a problem at all with writing this poem. The flow was well done, and the rhymes didn't fee forced at all. Keepit up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I think this is very dark. And it immediately got to me when I read it. I think that the flow is very good and I liked this poem immensely. Every line seems crammed with so much meaning that reading it again is a must. Well done. xx