by manic moments Aug 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Far away from your sight |
The wya used each word i nthe beginnign twice made the poem mroe real for me, made it stick out. great jobb. |
by Tripp
The entire poem was...magnificent. Emotion was steeped in every line. Loss sucks...alot. You just have to turn to what you do have when you realize you're missing something. Great job on this, it's prolly one of my favorites of yours. |
by Willow
I'm sorry dom. i didn't mean to make you feel this way. i can't stop us from drifting apart. i..........i don't know wat to do anymore. i love you enough to know that my pain is causeing you pain. i don't want that at all. good if only i was better again. if onyl i was never depressed. if only i never used your shoulder to cry on. i'm sorry. |
by kia
This is a really great poem. I related to it really bad. Kinda hurt to read. Thanx for the comment on my poem. To be honest im not sure if its about a friend or more. I guess im kind of inbetween the two. Adding you to my favs. Take care xo. |
by X~Angie~X
Omg wow.. this is such a great poem. it has so much emotion in it. wow i lvoe it. it makes me sad tho. cuz i can relate.. aww great poem. sad tho |