by BleedingAngel Aug 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She takes his hand in hers |
Awwww..this makes me cry a lil......awsome i lik it alot.. |
Hmm, dun really get wot u mean by untrue? well, do tell me sumtime... |
by Esther
This poem is very good 5/5! i hpoe you write more like this one!! |
by Jessica
Awh, that was soo sad.. Wow, I loved the twist at the end.. I always find poems with them so much more exciting! Wonderful work hun! 5/5 |
by Sarah Ann
Awww...I love this poem! It reminds me of my horrid past, and its sad something like this could be so true. Great, emotional write! |