what a perfect poem to describe what I've felt in the past..having to move on..you put it so brilliantly..great job!!! :) Luv Michelle

I just read this again...I'm loving it even more..the air that's all that's listening..that is so poignant... :(

this was amazing i loved it , i loved the way you chose your words, perfect descriptions of your feelings, keep up the good work .... :)

This was beautiful - it truly captured the feelings and sadness involved with getting over a broken heart. i agree !!! well dun m8 :) xxx

your poem is so excellent