Good poem ... I can understand the way you feel, maybe because I recognize it.. I like this one |
by JamesP
I can't help but wonder who these are about. good job by the way |
by Simon Hayes
This is a great piece with some very strong emotion. I really like the flow, though there is one bit I think you could change a little just to finalise the wonderful flow... |
And thanks for you comment on my poem ... xxx |
Wow...this is great. reminds me of my stuff actually...and nobody has ever done that. |
by Anthony
Amazing. I really love this poem. I hate going through that with people. Thats why i stopped having to buy bullets for my heart. Great write. 5/5 |