by Michael D Nalley Aug 14, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Rampant confusion through dreams that cry |
by BlueJay
Wow this piece is amazing. It is stunning and the word choice is fantastic. This piece blew me away. This is beautiful as it has been said before, and it really does make the audience stop and think for a moment. 5/5 |
As the effect of time leaves its eternal mark |
Very beautiful. The flow seemed a little forced in places. But not enough to take away from the beauty of the poem. Very well done. |
by Goran Rahim
As always another great poem by a great poet, |
by Natalie
Wow-- This was beautiful. I loved this line: "If I cannot reach heaven let heaven come to me" |