Ooo! Random poem lol. I like it. It really reminds me sometimes when I don't know what's become of me, and why I'm acting like someone I'm not. Great write =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Oh. I liked this one. I found in kind of sad, dark, mysterious, lots of emotion and images. Really nicely done as usual. :]

Very nice explaination of who you are and how much that can change. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This Really Reminds Me Somewhat Of My Poem "From A Boy To A Man"... Looking Back At The "Old Me".. Always Forces Me To Want To Stay As Far Away From Him As Possible. Putting On That New Personality Is What Decides Whether Your Future Will Be A Good One. It's Nice To See That Someone Has Similar Feelings As Myself. A Great Write 5/5..

-Darrin

Great poem!! i can really relate to having the low self esteem and can still feel some of the feelings your feeling..thankfully I believe in God and I read in the bible it said "you were created in my image, you are beautiful and flawless" it is true and you have to believe that regardless how YOU feel...GOd thinks your gorgeous..Loved the title!!
_krissey

I love the very ending of this poem this is great but then I know that you dont prefer in rhyme I like poems who rhyme but then apoem that didnt rhyme was not bad As i said great job well done

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Geneross

Awh, wow, this was good.. But maybe it should be in a different section, this one doesn't really seem right.. I liked how you wrote this, it was very creative with a title to match.. It flowed well and contained a lot of emotion! Nice job 5/5

Ooh. wow. I loved this. And I loved the ending too. Very nicely done.

I thought the rhyming was pretty good, and the flow was good too. Nothing I'd change. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Sometimes people hide behind so many different things that it can take great patience and determination to reveal the "real" you. I think in places such as the very first line and the most of stanza three it is very "wordy," which hinders the flow. I think it is wordy because you forced the language, maybe trying to make it sound more erm..."professional?"
I'd just suggest you relax a little, sometimes simple is good too. But, when it isn't a thesaurus is very useful.
Thanks for sharing.

The girl I witness
That girl that faces me
That's not my reflection
Can this be a dream?
Wow you have an amazing talent for words. I enjoyed this just as much as the last. Mirror mirror on the wall.. we she be there to capture me when I fall?.. You have inspired me to write a new poem!

Hmm, this was an interesting poem, and instead of giving you advice or moral support or whatever, I'll just comment on the poem. I thought it was good, I just thought you rhyme the word 'me' too many times.

Bt still u didnt show us whoat did the world do to u? accident?burned?trying to be someone ur not.this is a great poem i liked a lot, but u missed something. 4/5

Good poem! Alot of people can relate to it! Good job 5/5

Omg this is exactly how im feeling right now but now i want 2 find who i was becoz i luvd it n otha pplz did 2 but now i cant find who i used 2 be n it scars me

i luvd it :)