This is really great. glad to see you posting again.

Wow, I'm speechless Holly!

Hands cut
on fallen tears
while rummaging through the chaos
^^^ Wow, love the wording here!

Conquering
the darkness
while lighting the space in between
^^^ That third line really seals the deal, excellent!

Stealing
the fragments
of the person I used to be
^^^ Just wow!

Amazing piece of poetry here, Holly!

This is a fantastic poem, i look up to your poetry. bye.

This was an okay piece, I think. What most intrigued me was the structure, very unique, and rather nice. The words themselves were quite good too, yet for some reason, I wasn't particularly impressed with it, I wish I could tell you why, but I don't know the answer, sorry.

Brad