Crackling Embers (Cinquain)

Wow such a lovely image that you painted there. It made me feel just as relaxed as I would had I really been sitting in front of that fire, I could almost feel the warmth.

The only thing that I have to say is that some of the syllables are off. Yours is 2,5, 6, 9, 2 instead of the 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 that its supposed to be, fix that and this poem would be breathtaking.

The simplicity of this poem, is what brings out the beauty of the words. A lovely write.

Take Care.

Great job. I really like this one!

Ohh i miss campfires now! i use to have them all the time at my grandparents house it's just we've barely been there all year long because of my grandpa.

beautifully done, you're making many memories come alive for those who love sitting next to the warm heat of fires.

~Jacklyn

Thought provoking,
It has a calm feeling on it..
Good Work!

God bless you!