With all thats Dead in Me

by KillMeMyLove   Aug 14, 2006


I try to block the feelings out that make my insides scream

They eat away at my future and all a girl could dream

I try to release these feelings but my lips wont let me speak

They only leave unspoken words in the wetness on my cheek

They trace back up to my eyes where i am so dead

Stripped me of my life and crushed the future in my head

The one ill never live before i couldn't see

that ill never have that future with all thats dead in me...

(I'm Still Working on it...Sorry its not finished yet...i just needed advice on what i have thus far Thank you)

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  • 17 years ago

    by 2AStarOfEfinity

    Well, i think you should add more affect on your eyes and how there dead. But, its good so far...so keep working on it.