Nice song. Battles with one's shadow aspect are always fun, win lose or draw.

Nice one... i tried singing it... its cool! well keep writing!

~angel~

It's totally kool. i love it heaps. keep writing, i love ur stuff. i bet heaps of people have u on their favourites list : D

I loved it cuz i like wat u said in it and i to like to hold dis special persons hand cuz its good for me and i feel special so great job 5/5 keep writing poems :)