Wow such a strong and powerful poem, you wrote it so well even though it was inflicting pain to sumone so close to you, i think you and the person that you didnt name are very brave and i wish you all the best..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

Wow such a strong and powerful poem, you wrote it so well even though it was inflicting pain to sumone so close to you, i think you and the person that you didnt name are very brave and i wish you all the best..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

Wow such a strong and powerful poem, you wrote it so well even though it was inflicting pain to sumone so close to you, i think you and the person that you didnt name are very brave and i wish you all the best..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

Wow such a strong and powerful poem, you wrote it so well even though it was inflicting pain to sumone so close to you, i think you and the person that you didnt name are very brave and i wish you all the best..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

This is a very good poem, and a lot of families do fight, don't feel targeted. My own family is like that, I am a love child, and I can't see my dad anymore. I hate my past, too, but it's a part of us, you know? In a way, it has made us who we are today, whether thats good or bad is beyond me. But yeah a lot of different things happen to different people, and everyone has their secrets. It's up to them if they want to keep it secret. But yes, it is a nice poem, and very true, as well. I think I'll read a bit more of your work, you seem very talented. Feel free to read and comment mine, as well, I would very much appreciate it.

Awww... this is sad.. but written beautifully.. you have amazing talent.. keep it up

Wow.. this is really sad.. but beautifully written! good job

It was really heartbreaking...And your emotion was so clear that i could even feel your hate from here! Its a true pity to hear that this poem is true, Im sorry.But you have to be strong and to smile again, just for your little boy, you know he absolutely deserves it and more! Anyway, amazing writing... It really appealed to me.Keep it up and all the best!

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Extremely talented with such pashonet words GOOD JOB =}