by VYXSIN Aug 14, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Around, all around, the dark memories gather. |
Wow, well written, but the structure was not that good, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Also it was very short, I'd like to see it a bit longer. |
Wow! Very dark poem indeed. But still its written really well. Good flow. I really liked it. Keep them up! xx |