I can really relate to this one too...I loved the eomtion you put into it. This was well written and had a unique rhyme scheme...really good.
5.5 (^_^)
Breanna

I like this poem its cute...
keep up the good work! *_*
hope to read from ya soon.
~lots of love~
ByE

Omg!!!!! i love it......

I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM AND I AM GOING TO READ IT TO MY XBOYFRIEND CAUSE I FEEL THAT WY. GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP KID.