Sin (Pleiades)

by Megann Lee   Aug 14, 2006


Sitting silently she lets her hands fall.
Smitten faces turn to face the hall.
Silently she looks up, people flocking round.
Sad faces stare down, she's been found.
Sin traced hate, flow easily from eyes.
She knows well, for she too cries.
Sweet child, lay lifeless in the hall.
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Pleiades: Only one word is allowed in the title, followed by a seven-line stanza. The first word in every line must begin with the same letter as the word in the title. (My First poem using an actual Scheme sorry if it bites. D;)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, taht was so sadd. I loved the voacaublary you used in this, it was great. The flow worked well and I liked the form. Nice job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    "flocking round"
    ['around'? or 'round'? I dunno, 'around' sounded like it fit better]

    Woot! Nice first attempt, you did a great job. I'm not very good at formed poetry either. Good job though, you've got more guts than me in trying.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very nicely done... I've written one and know it's kind of hard to do, but you did it wonderfully. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oooh. wowee, Megan-- This was great. I've tried one of these and I actually found it pretty tricky, tehe. Loved the words you chose for this. Excellently written. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    GREAT POEM!! WOOP, WOOP!
    LoveYOU!
    Love,
    Your Emo Wifey

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