Great poem.... hmm I can only wonder who the man was in the poem. Great discriptions of everything. I love you Megan.

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Great poem!...quite long but interesting...tell me who the man was?lol...but yeh the flow was okay but it got a tiny lil bit rocky only a lil bit BUT rest of the peom was great..i liked your choice of woring...and it was very well written! 10/10!!lol Great Poem Indeed!
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Keep Writting..i love your poems!
AND Keep smiling!

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Tormented

It is good, but I really quite dislike all of the battles fought for america and all that. I mean, look at what we have fought for : media coverage running our lives, suicide genocide, powered eggs?! I mean, wtf has the world come to? It's really quite pathetic. But, of course, that's just my opinion and it's just as flawed as anyone elses...so...i guess this whole thing was pretty much pointless. Oh, well, its tuesday and you know what that means...UFO's.RUNNNN!!! jk