by FrozenTearsBleed Aug 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Im walking home from school, |
by Stephy
Wow very good! Keep writting!-xxxxx- |
by Jessica
Hmm, I found this kind of confusing.. First of all, you didn't want a baby and then you adopted two children? Maybe, I am missing something.. Anyway, it flowed well and the rhymes worked well. There were a few grammer mistakes that you should fix though. |