Hmm, I found this kind of confusing.. First of all, you didn't want a baby and then you adopted two children? Maybe, I am missing something.. Anyway, it flowed well and the rhymes worked well. There were a few grammer mistakes that you should fix though.

Hoping God would give me a sigh.
^ It should be "sign" not "sigh"

Nice job, keep up the good work! 5/5

Wow very good! Keep writting!-xxxxx-