Maiden Scar

by LadyPearl   Aug 15, 2006


Stolen fields of scars
Remnants from beyond
Kiss the light goodbye
Turn the path awry
Past the blackened moon
Where lost tears are strewn
I hide in shadows waiting
Dreaming as I'm drifting

Blood licks at my chin
As dark fear cause chagrin
An aroma spread the night
Where thirsty desire ignite
Within a werewolve's belly
Hunger strikes it's plea
Or a vampire's cold lust
Hunting in disgust

Dressed in cotton white
Fleeing in pure fright
Faces leap from trees
Bodies in debris
Howls veil the sky
Past a baby's cry
On and on again
Through the night's domain

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really like the words you chose in this poem. Using really odd words to describe something. Good stuff Noni.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow! I liked (yet another) one of your poems! Lol. Great flow and catchy vocab. It kept me focussed on the poem, and not to let my mind wander somewhere else. Great write! 5/5 =) xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow. Not at all suprised by how well you have wrote this. Yet agani it was amazing. The flow was wonderful. I liked the idea of it aswell. Very dark, good images by using the words you used.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Absolutely wonderful poem this is! It is such a great, mysterious and dark write. Your choice of words are stunning and it brings a good flow to the poem. Keep up your great work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww, wow, this was good! The flow worked really well as did the rhymes, the descriptions were dark yet beautiful, and the emotion was clear.. nice job! 5/5

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