Comments : Not every boy's a man

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow, excellent poem! I love the pride and the honesty screaming from your words. Wonderful write, I can't even begin to explain how much I agree with you. Keep up your great work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    The whole "getting pregnant" and STD thing is a little exaggerated...sounds like a little close-minded and presumptious. Most teens that have sex use birth control methods, condoms being the most commonly used (and the safest). I think the real issue is loss of innocence and the idea that sex is not personal anymore and the beauty and privacy of it has been ruined. However, I do agree with your point that ladies extremely outweigh gentlemen now-a-days...which sucks! I don't know one guy who hasn't looked at porn on a regular basis at one point...which makes me kind of depressed when I think about it. Anyway...sorry I went off on such a tangent. Nice writing and good topic!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, that was great! Excellent, excellent write! It is so true, I think that everyone on this site should read this.. It is truly inspirational.. Great job, keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    AHHHHHHH! B-E-A-UTIFUL! Awesome! Sexy! UBER HOTTTTTTTTT! 10/5 (if possible) lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I liked It.. It was nice And bout a subject i havent heard from someone.. very unique

    I especially am lovin these stanzas

    And personally, if I die a virgin
    I can’t explain how proud I’ll be
    To not have slept with the fools in school
    Sure makes a woman out of me!

    Some boys constantly have sex on their mind
    Some are constantly looking for fun
    That’s why not every boy is a man
    Nor does he become one

    Excellent work 5/5

    ~!*Meaghen~!*
    ~!*FallenTears~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sage x3

    Great poem. I loved it and it has a good message, too. It was great ad well written. Great job. 5 billion out of five.
    Sage

  • 18 years ago

    by Aunt Michelle

    How true!! Keep the good work up and I will keep reading if u would like to e-mail me my address is angelwithdevilhorns82@hotmail.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Aunt Michelle

    How true!! Keep the good work up and I will keep reading if u would like to e-mail me my address is angelwithdevilhorns82@hotmail.com

  • 18 years ago

    by shadow-monster is cute

    Your right every guy doesnt have to have sex early i might just stickwith u
    because im only 11

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    Awesome write.
    im totally agreeing with u girl!!

    nice work keep it up!

    sophie:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kenickie

    I agree with you on every aspect i'm only 14 and i've already had to put up w/ way too mush of the teen pressure to have sex

  • 18 years ago

    by Colossus

    I totally agree with you, most of us guys are jerks.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Wishes do come true*

    This poem is excellent!! Everyone should read it because its the truth!!! Boys dont always grow up to be men>

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    You have done it again...alsome as usual!!!! well im going to rate it a five and all that!! well read my new ones and vote & comment plz....thanx!!!

    ~danielle

  • 18 years ago

    by Tory

    I really like this one too...=]

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Awsome - 5/5 (again) lol

  • 18 years ago

    by tatiana

    I agree so much on this .
    recently i have felt the absence of a proper boy so intensely and i'm so confused on this subject...
    i'm so happy that someone thinks like you do about one night stands. i think they are so immature and meaningless! if you really like the other person enough to kiss him/her (let's say) why not do it again the next day and the day after?

  • 17 years ago

    by STEPHANiiE

    Yo thats mad true!!! Lost of guys only think of one thing. and many little that don't.

    Keep comin wit the poems gurl, ur poems r mad GOOD!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Megadrive

    My dear, wel stated! I agree 100%
    "And personally, if I die a virgin
    I can’t explain how proud I’ll be
    To not have slept with the fools in school
    Sure makes a woman out of me!"
    Perfect! I love this message your sending, I just am amazed that there r still even GIRLS out there that have these point of views, its way to few! Now about the actual poem, I liekd it! It flowed very smoothly, not everything rhymed, which is a relief, ppl think all poetry has to rhyme, it was honestly a breathe of fresh air! It was a simple read (Thats not ment in a bad way) It means I didnt have to struggle with words, they where presented in a very smooth manner, and your point is nice and direct, it was just a very great poem! I enjoyed it very much, thank you =)

    ~*+Megan+*~