My Love Is Like A Mosh Pit

by Raychel   Aug 15, 2006


My love is like a mosh pit,
Flowing endlessly,
Letting hope die with a crowd,
And sometimes you have to bleed.

Sometimes it's just too frustrating,
To keep it up,
Sometimes I just want to get away,
And go to clean my cuts.

Being shoved too hard one day,
And being too hurt to keep shoving back,
Having the strength to keep it all up,
Is something I usually lack.

But I have to do it forever,
I have to keep loving,
Until the next song plays,
I've just got to keep shoving.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Haha ironic but good...the metaphors were very well used...i liked the end stanza the best..
    love ya lots,
    sore