This was a great stanza, I would love to see you add to it. The wording was beautiful it just ended to soon.

Ali,
I feel so honored that you would take my advise. I do have to say it did make such a differsence, It is truly beautiful now I wish I could rate it again ,it would definately be a 5 I want to read your others, I hope you`ll read mine.

Ali u rock. keep up the poetry this one was awsome 5/5.