WOW! That last line just makes me not want to stop reading! This poem was filled with such love and compassion for you lover and it was a beautiful read! I enjoy your imagery that shines through your work! Excellent write!!
-Krissey

So full of emotion and passion. I loved this poem. Beautiful!! 5/5

Beautiful job. You had some very original lines in this poem. Keep it up

Beautiful job. You had some very original lines in this poem. Keep it up

Beautiful honey!
u did a great work
inspired me aswell!!!
very good keep it up
luv u
xxxxxxx