Aw, wow, taleee! That was awesome.. It looked very complicated though, lol, I don't think I would be able to do that.. The flow and syllable counts all worked and the words you used seemed perfect! Great job, Ily! 5/5

Another really effective poem! I was just wondering where you learn all of the styles of poetry? I really like this one because it makes the flow and rhythm all fit together so well. Great job 5/5

Very well written, perfect use of words, really impressive piece of writting.
well done 5/5

This poem was truely thought about not rushed and i loved it i have done this type of thing before but never really thought twice about it lol i didnt know it was called a lia though well done and thnx for entering my contest you won :):):) xxx alex xxx

Great style. Nice use of words, though I think you should try explaining things more clearly.

Wow Nat. This was amazing. I loved it. The wording and everything was greeat. You are a magnifist writer. :]]]]

Awww no SMAWCE sister!! Your poems are all gone :(
Stupid downvoting people. Grrr, they do it to me too :(

L0ve reading different styles 0f p0ems. great use 0f words. xx

Oo, that was a cool form! i really liked your rhyming of different words, like passions and actions, anguish and English. those are unusual pairings, and cool!
very good job. thanks for your comments on my poems as well!

Awesome poem! i specially liked your choice of words you used and the rhyming was so good!...The flow was like perfect!...it didn't seemed rushed at all :-)10/10!
Take care
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
A.Pathetic.mistake

Awesome job! I really love this poem. Keep it up!!!!

Wow tht is rally good and to tell u the truth i never heard of Lai b4.....sounds lik a good form of poetry....keep on writing!

Hey im the new girl sarahs sis. thanks 4 commenting on my poem "just a little walk"
ur poem is wonderfull it realy rhyms i like that .keep it up

Great job! I like how you use different styles of poetry so often. keep it up!!

Well just like all of your other poems. I still dont understand half of the words you use. Lol..-taps you on the head- remember silly, I am NOT this intelligent. BUT what I did understand i loveddddd it. -hugs- mwah 5/5

Obscure.
i think it was awesome although not sure why ur fallowing all these rules and not just goin with ur own thing but still none the less its another amazing poem :D i loved it

Wow you know alot about poem dontcha...u put perfect words in a poem to soo keep on writing!!!

Natalie my dear poet
another breath taking piece
5/5
the talent you have shines through this sad poem.

I like your knowledge of poems it differs every time I read.
~Emah
5/5

This is a strong poem too! it has feelings in it!

you have a nice way of writting your poems! and you always have a creative way to write your poems! which makes the reader to read more and more!

Keep it up

''Stealing Innocence..''
That has to be one of the most memorable lines of this one. It has such an impact on the reader. You have great poetry! Truly amazing.