I honestly did not enjoy the ending as much as I did the rest of them poem. However, this was wonderfully written for you have amazing talent, espically in writing in forms. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5,5

I have never seen that style of poem before, it looks very difficult. Never-the-less, you did a fantastic job, yet again. Your vocabulary is just perfect in all of your poems, using a wide range to describe everything. I love reading your poems. Keep it up. =] 5/5

One of the few fives ive given. Your going directly to faves.

Hmmmm.
I haven't read a poem with this stlye ever. I really must say, I enjoyed it quite a bit actually. It was very nicely written, and the words where amazing.

Very well put together..5/5 def. this is gonna go in my favorite poems section..=]