Wow , iv been reading through poems for about half an hour n they'v all been pretty crap, and i went to yours and thought ye another one, but this is so beautiful, it really is i luv it it deserves more than a 5.5 |
by Simon Hayes
Great writing... This one oozes determination and postivitity. A very enjoyable piece that ends so wonderfully with a strong, powerful attitude. Great stuff!! |