Very well done. Flowed well with a heartfelt message. Good to see you posting again. |
by Chelsey
That last line gave me goosebumps Steven! What an excellent and beautiful write this was! Your first stanza had me glued and your last stanza made me want to not stop reading...I enjoyed from beginning to end, beautiful piece of poetry! |
by Simon Hayes
Beautiful write Steven... The flow was just perfect and the overall romance of the poem was flawless... A special piece! |