by Avrii Monrielle Aug 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Forgotten words |
by Ruthie
Hey lovely job :) I'd just suggest breaking it into stanza's... but it's also effective 2 leave it that way if you want your reader to feel um... what's the word...lol I can't think... like they have to go on... lol I dunno get back to me on this one... but overall a nice work :) keep it up! |