Heh, i like the first 4 lines. they catch the attention, which is good in a poem that appears to be longer - it gives you will to read on

Heh, i like the first 4 lines. they catch the attention, which is good in a poem that appears to be longer - it gives you will to read on

Great job, really catchy and well written and tied together with big words lol. Keep up the good work.
-Jenna xo

Keep up the good work XD