by Weeping Wolf Aug 15, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I will be the sweetest thing under the sun |
This is beautifully written.I love the repeat of certain stanzas.And your use of images, like 'a suitcase heart' are so unique and fantastic.This is a very touching, moving poem and reveals both the sadness and all the love in your heart.Excellent. |
by Katt
Beautiful poem lala. Keep it up! |
by Unrequited
I love it, dear. :) Ya know, you've always been my favorite! ;) |