Hmm this was pretty good not really my type of poem cuz it talks about god..but u know its very good..5/5
keep it up

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

This was good, I know how it is to get to that point of wanting to break and what God was trying to show me was that i couldn't handle it on my own and I needed to give it all to him. Maybe thats what he's saying to you. . . just a thought though.
Godbless you,
erica