First love, first poem

by Jamie   Aug 15, 2006


I look into your eyes,
You look straight into mine,
Those brown hazel eyes of yours,
Swirling, twirling, crashing waves,
I get lost every time i look into them,
When i look inside those eyes,
Deep inside those eyes,
I feel like i want to be with you for the rest of our lives,
When i look into those eyes my whole world just stops.

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  • 18 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Hey it'z mi hannah, you left a cmmnt on mi poem just lyk i lov u nd i'm gna add ya kk soo we cn talk lol...nd thhz iz a awsum i lov it hepz it'z real gud
    lov Hanz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Nice, liked this poem a lot... i know this feeling so i kinda connected with it, very nicely done loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hind

    Hey nice poem...its cute...i gave it a 5.5 [who cares what the other people voted] its good for a star

  • 18 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Thanks 4 commenting on my poem.i think u have realy nice poems . keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Awww i like the words. its a realy nice poem. keep it up.

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