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by Ashlee Aug 15, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Can you hear his heart beat? Can you hear Can you hear the gun shot? Can you hear Can you hear him crying ? Can you hear Have you listened ? Do you care I hear him sobbing He wants you help I hear him crying So why doesnt anybody else? Do you hear him crying? Hes in your dreams now dont try to ignore him Hell just get louder hear his cry ..hear his mown Do you care Do you hear his heart? How fast it beats I bet you dont hear it any more.. 16years or crying and no ones help 16years of crying and you said you cared 16years thats all he had Did you hear the shot gun? Did you hear?
by nisha
Very good......i love it
by Shamar
Sound more like a true story. So much pain, I love it.
by angelmkc
Wow that really great poem. its well written.good job. i give it a 5/5
