by Synh Aug 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Gone Away |
Another great write! The only thing that could use some work is the rhyming in the last stanza. Outstanding job! 5/5 |
by Valerie
I love it!! |
Loved it, great job. I can relate to this poem, 5/5 |
Hey that poem was great like said already i can relate very well...loved it . |
That was well written |