by Katlynn Aug 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The feeling is getting to my skin. |
by ForeverYoung
I like the poem, but reading all the grammar errors just killed it, i wont vote it cause i would simply downvote it because of this. |
Totally amazing. i loved it all, from start to finish. brilliant writing. |
Very good! Some things didn't rhyme but thats ok. The story in the poem was really good it just made me want to read on and on. Great Job |