You Made Me Fall Down

by Katlynn   Aug 15, 2006


The feeling is getting to my skin.
you made me fall down once again.
pushed me down to the rocks.
my eyes are shading off blood.

my lips are dried blued.
my arms are shaking wrong.
you once made me a song.
we sang to it now it's not worth it.

you made me feel like shi.t.
nothing to do with myself.
now all i can do is cry.
wondering what or why.

i thought you were everything.
i guess my thoughts fall again.
you told me you wouldn't hurt me.
now i see the picture.

it's a black and white image.
were she's cutting herself.
he's making her feel like this.
the water is deeper, I'm thinking.

you locked me in here.
this house were i don't belong.
you leave to town.
before you pushed me to the ground.

now I'm sitting here.
pushing myself out of the window.
the glass is hitting me.
my body is bleeding.

against the white dress i own.
the only thing i wear.
i keep myself in the water.
when you come back.

you see me face down.
cold as white.
dead on the grounded sand.
without a i love you note.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    I like the poem, but reading all the grammar errors just killed it, i wont vote it cause i would simply downvote it because of this.

    ~Murder.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Totally amazing. i loved it all, from start to finish. brilliant writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Very good! Some things didn't rhyme but thats ok. The story in the poem was really good it just made me want to read on and on. Great Job