WOW OMG!!!! Sore that poem was amazing!!! One of your best. The flow was flawless, rhyming was excellent. I really liked the story thing too. If its true than just know that their are alot of ppl(guys) that like chubby/fat girls,((like my brother)) and if you want some tips for loosing weight then just email me. ok :)

5/5. Take care
--Shannon--

Well that was an interesting poem... You can always grow really long claws like I have and when ever they pick on you just cut the beep out of them. ^_^ That's always fun to do! :D Good luck with your weight but I bet you're still pretty. Everyone looks at theirself and says that they're ugly. They always pick out the bad. And then the people that are actually ok with how they look feel strange if they say they're pretty because they just sound conceded. But yes ppl that pick on others about how they look are just mean. Good luck with what you're looking for but try to pick out some things you don't have issues with. Maybe you have nice hair or nice skin. Curly long eye lashes or something. As long as you don't turn out like all the other girly girls that follow trends you're ok with me. C ya sore.

Wow this was a wonderfully written poem.
Very good.
You are very good with your words.
~*Amber*~

That's how I feel. I'm sitting here, listening to my stomach rumbling, feeling the pain..and crying because I want to get a knife and do everything in this poem.

This is great...er well, the rhyme and poem is great...the story isn't though. Don't let the world's idea of perfection influence you. not everyone can be perfect like Tripp :) haha. Excellent job on this...keep it up

A;ways remember people who pick on others have serious self issues themselves most the time its not even u.. =] very nice work.. keep it up
Jessica