by Megann Lee Aug 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Don't be scared, it's only for a little bit. |
I'm not sure why but I really didn't enjoy reading it... At the beginning you had rhyme and broke it by the second line.. I don't understand why.. |
by Goran Rahim
Oh a very sad poem but so beautifuly written. I really enjoyed reading it, great job like always.5/5 |
by Natalie
Don't hurt cause I'm not their physically. |
by LadyPearl
Great poem. The last stanza was inspirational. I think you can use fill words less. |
by blueknight
Yeah the flow and the alternating of words was great there are so many poems songs itself now and this is one of them ill enjoy reading and yeah sad the rhyme was well and the metaphor helps to make this good |