Don't kiss Me

Wow this is awesome!!!
you have so much talent gal..that was more than words could describe =)

I love the idea of the poem..bringing death in your lips....very great point of view.lool!
no seriously your poem was very heartfelt and outstanding!!
I hope you're Okay
thanks for inspiring me -*)
Lov
NemO xxxxxxxxxxx

Gah! I didn't remember doing this poem. So I'll do another one!

*Kiss* lol, sorry I had to break the tension. Seems like you're really sad, or just on a creative rampage with these sad poems. Awww Noni, this was a really good poem and I liked the rhymes. Kisses can be fun and make people smile!! I hope I made you smile :) Really good poem! I liked it!

Wow *wide eyed* im sorta get shivers a bit...a 5/5 for me and i think i made a mistake on another poem of urs it was suppose to b 5/5 not 5/55 srry bout tht..

Noni--- This was great! I loved this poem!

Your flow was great. It didn't seem rocky at all to me.

I liked the rhymes too. There's some in there that were different, and that's always good.

I also REALLY liked how you repeated the same stanza at the start and at the finish but by adding another two lines to it at the end.

Great job, hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``