by My Obsεssion Mar 6, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When you look at me, |
wonderful poem. i hope to read more of your poems really soon. |
Nicely written...you displayed your emotions well. |
by ashley b
YOu started your poem off really well. It caught my attention. Nicely written! Towards the end there seemed almost too much rhyming. It's just me so dont think your poems bad. Its just an opinion! good job! |
Thanks for the comments and keep them a comin!! |