When

by My Obsεssion   Mar 6, 2004


When you look at me,
what do you see?
A lonely angel there?
Trying to find
though no one will mind
a love, but do you care?

When I look at you,
what do I do?
Do I clutch at my heart?
Do I think of
the game of love
I’m not quite willing to start?

When they look at us,
if we’re together will they fuss?
Why can’t they just see?
If it weren’t to be right,
oh why do they fight,
if it wasn’t meant to be?

When we are together,
will this mortal world still hold our tether?
And our spirits fly free?
Will our souls become one
as we fly towards the sun
to wherever our heaven may be?

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  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    wonderful poem. i hope to read more of your poems really soon.

    Best of wishes, good luck, and much more,
    Ashley

  • 20 years ago

    by Tony Alexander

    Nicely written...you displayed your emotions well.

  • 20 years ago

    by ashley b

    YOu started your poem off really well. It caught my attention. Nicely written! Towards the end there seemed almost too much rhyming. It's just me so dont think your poems bad. Its just an opinion! good job!
    ashley b

  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Thanks for the comments and keep them a comin!!