Thanks for the comments and keep them a comin!!

YOu started your poem off really well. It caught my attention. Nicely written! Towards the end there seemed almost too much rhyming. It's just me so dont think your poems bad. Its just an opinion! good job!
ashley b

Nicely written...you displayed your emotions well.

wonderful poem. i hope to read more of your poems really soon.

Best of wishes, good luck, and much more,
Ashley