I liked it. Very different from the others iv read. left me thinking. Good work keep it up. Love you to vote or comment on any of mine. 5\5

This is a great love poem. I love it!

Hey! Good poem! Lol, I got freaked out for a second when I saw your name and saw you were from Australia! Lol. Cause one of my friend's name is Claire Louise J. Freaky. Anyway, GOOD WRITING! :D