Aw, this was really sad.. Just keep your chin up okay hun? The flow was good and the descriptions worked but were not overly detailed.. But what was really great was the emotion and feeling you put into it, every line was oozing hatred and sadness.. Great job! 5/5

What a sad poem, but yet very well written. I can relate somehow...I use to live at home with my parenst and my dad treated me so badly. I just hated him back then, but after I moved out we have the best relationship ever....I am his little princess again adn I love him sooo much. I forgave him and our past...We have to look forward!! Great poem hunni, be strong, things might get better.

Very dark.. Nicely done.. Im not sure what else to say.. Though it didn't have much flow.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

That was powerful & wonderful! I loved it!
Great work, Megan.
LoveYOU!
Love,
Your Emo Wifey

That was such a nice poem i really liked. Becouse to most people its so true.you have really nice poems. keep it up.

Wow it does remind me of my poem... very nice.. sry if its about you