Revenge

by King of The Elements   Aug 16, 2006


As i hold the bleeding knife in my hand i think

Did you feel what i feel for her as i look at your pink face still fading with blood

I look at the knife and see a faint blood print and wonder is it human or animal

like the many choices we have i had to

The danger to the person i love was to great and my temper all the while rising

Still not truly an affair though you were with him and me since i allowed it

Now as i look at his dead lifeless body i realized he was already dead

Now time to clean up the mess i made or better yet the two men she loved in two different ways found
dead toghter would she be better......would she

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  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Not a bad poem at all. Rather boring and the same stuff I have been reading about the past year but never the less a great poem! Keep up the great work. Suicide and cutting are nothing to joke about

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Hmm. this had a nice theme to it which I enjoyed.

    I look at the knife and see a faint blood print and wonder is it human or animal

    Great lines - really thought provoking. I liked the ending regarding being both dead but I feel it is left hanging a little. Would she be better....how?
    Better off? More sad?
    I think you could put something more into it but not sure what.
    Good effort 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Nice poem...i liked it
    Oxo Laura Marie

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