by SomewhereAmongThePieces Aug 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
This is a song I wrote at four o'clock in the morning I couldn't sleep and I had these words rushing through my head. |
by angela
Wow!!! |
WOOW, GREAT POEM |
Wow, you are a fantastic writer, i've started to write songs myself, this was just great. i cant wait to see it on a cd someday! |
by Nula
Awesome poem.. i like it |
This poem is a little better than the other one. Sorry but thats just my opinion. Anyway, the rhyming was not forced at all. |