Great rhyming, Great flow. I just wish you weren't right. It hurts to know your poem speaks the truth. Well done anyways. 5\5. Take care. Love you to vote or comment on any of mine.

Wow what a great poem, I can so relate, cant wait to read more of your poems 5/5

Wow.. This is a great poem. I give it a 5/5 bc i can relate and it speaks for itself. Great Job

You have some real talent Brian...
but it comes at a high cost......
Good luck mate! Hope your fortunes change...