This is a good poem and it makes me think we can never really show our pain on the out side we can never let anyone know because we have to make people think everything is fine when its really not it makes me think that if we could really show all our hurt on the outside instead of keeping it in maybe thing like that wouldn't happen maybe if we were able to show our pain that it wouldn't be quit so unbareable anyways thats a good poem

Wow!..that was awesome.i loved it!..keep writing..ill be looking forward to reading more of your work:)

Sad, such a well written poem...*hugs*

Wow