Awh, you can never lose your talent hun.. You simply feel like you are writing badly so you are not trying.. Okay, my suggestions on the poem are to try and not use "I" and "You" so much.. Try and use clever ways to avoid that and add more power to the other words.. Also, try and even out the lengths of the lines and stanza's so they are all about the same.. Add a few more details and it should be great! Keep it up hun, we'd miss you if you went! 5/5

"I need you now like I needed you then"

Wow, that sounded familiar. I think it was a Good Charlotte cover song from someone else. Eww I hate Good Charlotte. Haha, I hope you didn't take it from them. A really good poem. Yes, I know it was not one of your better poems, but it was a great try.

PS. I think you have a wonderful smile, and you look beautiful :)

Without you I am nothing
I wouldnt say taht but sometimes it feels like that. This wasn't your best work but keep it up!!

I love it! i can really relate to it