How Much do you love me?(conversation)

by TheRevelation   Aug 16, 2006


Thr girl asks the boy
"How much do you love me?"
The boy paused
Tears started up and the girl ran

The boy ran after her and said
"I love you like a flower loves the sun
Like a dog loves his master
Like A new born baby relies on the mother

I love you like life
Your my one and only
Like the world never ends
I love you that much."

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww! So cute...I love it! :)
    Keep writing hun! I love you poems!

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    AWWW;; SO SWEET! REALLY GOOD FLOW! NiCE JOB && KEEP iT UP!

    *GiRL iN LOVE♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Sorrow

    So very sweet...and i have to say it's very typical guys to do, being stupid and wait with the answer, and make the girl so insecure...very sweet, like it alot

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey i like the way uve written this piece., very well written xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, this was so sweeet! That was beautiful.. It was short and simple but very effective! The only thing I would change would be here:

    Like A new born baby relies on the mother
    ^ I would make it "loves it's mother" instead of "realies on the mother" but that's just my opinion..

    Nice job, I loved it! 5/5

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