WOW! lovely!!! i really liked it! i mean REALLY liked it lol! it was awesome! keep up the great work! GBU! Pepa

Awhh, this was so sweeet! That was beautiful.. It was short and simple but very effective! The only thing I would change would be here:

Like A new born baby relies on the mother
^ I would make it "loves it's mother" instead of "realies on the mother" but that's just my opinion..

Nice job, I loved it! 5/5

Hey i like the way uve written this piece., very well written xx

So very sweet...and i have to say it's very typical guys to do, being stupid and wait with the answer, and make the girl so insecure...very sweet, like it alot

AWWW;; SO SWEET! REALLY GOOD FLOW! NiCE JOB && KEEP iT UP!

*GiRL iN LOVE♥

Aww! So cute...I love it! :)
Keep writing hun! I love you poems!

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